Midnight was a cat who lived in an alley. She was black all over except her paws and around her mouth. Midnight had a secret. She could turn invisible! Every night she would head down to the pier, dive in the water, turn invisible, and catch fish.
When she was full she would go back to the alley. One day she saw a person. It was black all over except it's paws and around it's mouth! Midnight had never seen herself, so she did not know it was herself!!!
A day after the thing came, she saw a real person. She saw stuff floating around,and she went black... She awoke to find she was in a new lonely place!!!
She saw a person come. She hated this person, but she could not go invisible because she was scared. The person looked then said something that midnight could not understand. It sounded like, "This one, Mommy!!!"
Another person came and set her free! But not for long. The child quickly took Midnight to a completely other new place! She roamed around then mumbled quietly. It was her friend Jake! Jake told her where she was and Midnight understood perfectly! She had found a new home. Midnight never turned invisible again. She didn't need to.
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i am 8 and i think i do good stories!!!
I think your stories are great too, animal_lover. I like that Midnight found a home with Jake.
Animal Lover, I enjoyed seeing a picture of Midnight so I could tell what she looks like! She must be a very magical cat, because she wasn't even afraid to go in the water, unlike most cats.
It made me sad when she kept finding herself in lonely places. When I heard the little girl say, "This one, Mommy!!" I knew that Midnight had found a new home. I was so glad Jake was there to help her understand what had happened to her. Most of all, I was happy that she never needed to turn invisible again.
P.S.--I think you do good stories, too! :)
I just LOVE writing stories about animals!
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